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刪去下列句子中不必要的成分,把句子改寫得更簡潔。1)Upon examining our records,it seems that you have forgotten to file the personal data form which is required.2)All applicants who are interested in the job are obligated to provide the names of three references whom we can write to for evaluations of your job performance.3)He spoke as if he were feeling angry about the proposal that was recently suggested concerning promotion policies.4)The manager who is most experienced and with the greatest effi ciency,it seems obvious,should be given consideration for being promoted first.5)The vice president was a woman who had graduated from law school and with long experience in the business world.6)After having presented the annual report,the announcement about the merger was made by the president.7)The convention which was scheduled for the month of January wascancelled due to the fact that there were restrictions placed on trayel.8)The salesperson told us that we should write tO the main office directly for whatever information we were in need of.9)The brochure was written by the advertising manager,who then had it printed before mailing it to customers.10)We are writing in order to inform you of the alteration in our plans for convening on May 2,1995.11)It is apparent that the above date is not advantageous,and we have ascertained that May 5,1995,is a more convenient date for the three speakers whom we have asked tO address the meeting.12)We will attempt to ascertain the advisability of utilizing the central office for the meeting,and if we can,we will let you know.13)Your request was considered carefully by the committee,and it was decided to give an affirmative answer.14)Please advise US as to the possibility of your being free tO aecompany Mr.Jones to the district meeting.15)We are absolutely sure that Mr.Jones has an opportunity to advance in the company because of the fact that he is a man of experienee and of creativity.16)It goes without saying that we are acquainted with your policy onfiling tax returns,and we have every intention of complying withthe regulations which you have stated.17)Due to the dearth of paper,we are compelled to impose restrictions on the number of mailings.18)In addition tO this fact,as far as the budget is concerned.we must remember that it allows US only$200 a month for postage.19)It is necessary for US to inform you that the services of our research department that we formerly offered will be discontinued.20)I assumed that you will need approximately two weeks for the colleetion of data which will be incorporated into the reDon.21)My job is the management of the three offices which are located in the city,and I am expected tO participate in all planning sessions in addition tO visiting foreign plants.22)In regard to your inquiry,we are very sure that the material we are sending concerning career opportunities in New York under separate cover will be beneficial.23)In the event that you cannot accept our invitation to come to the meeting,we would appreciate your informing us of this fact as soon as possible.24)Unfortunately,after reviewing your proposal,we regretfully must inform you of our decision not to participate at this time.25)We trust that you will concur with our understanding of what the billing statement should be;however,should you require additional information,please do not hesitate to contact us.

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1)We find that you have forgotten to file the required personal data form

原句里有一個(gè)懸浮修飾語Upon examining our records,其邏輯主語應(yīng)該是we,但是句子中的形式主語卻是it;因此可以改成We find that.另外,把定語從句which is required改成一個(gè)前置形容詞,省略了兩個(gè)詞。

2)All applicants for the job must provide three references

求職者肯定是對這個(gè)工作感興趣的,因此沒有必要說who are interested in the job。另外,be obligated to do. 這個(gè)短語太正式古板,也很冗長,不如說must。還有reference一詞不僅可指推薦信,也可指推薦人,證明人等。

3)He spoke angrily about the recent proposal on promotion policies

把a(bǔ)s if feeling angry縮寫成一個(gè)副詞,另外把定語從句that was recently suggested縮寫成前置形容詞recent。

4)Obvioudy,the most experienced and efficient manager should be considered first for promotion.

我們把插入語it seems obvious改為一個(gè)修飾全句的副詞;另外,定語從句who is most experienced and with the greatest efficiencv是不平行結(jié)構(gòu),并列連詞and前后的句子成分不一樣,前面是從句,后面卻是介詞短語。最后,for being promoted是個(gè)很笨拙的表達(dá)方式,不如直接說for promotion。

5)The vice—president,a woman graduate from a law sch001.had long experience in business.

原句里含有一個(gè)不平行結(jié)構(gòu)who had graduated from law school and with long experience in the business world.

6)The president presented the annual report and then announced the merger.

這個(gè)句子含有一個(gè)懸浮修飾語After haying presented the annual report;另外,原句用被動(dòng)語態(tài)顯得很笨拙,不如用主動(dòng)語態(tài)簡潔有力。

7)The convention scheduled for January was cancelled owing tO travel restrictions

從句which was scheduled for.被改寫成一個(gè)由動(dòng)詞的過去分詞構(gòu)成的后置定語,for the month of January直接改成for January.

due to the fact that是累贅語(deadwood),restrictions Dlaced on travel可以改成travel restrictions。

8)The salesperson told US to write to the main office directlv for information

我們把賓語從句that we should write to. 改成由動(dòng)詞不定式構(gòu)成的賓語補(bǔ)足語。

9)The advertising manager wrote the brochure,had it printed and mailed to customers

這個(gè)句子改為主動(dòng)態(tài)更為簡潔流暢。

lO)We are writing tO inform you of the change in our plans for the meeting on May 2,1995.

符合介詞in order to可以縮短為to就行了。以下句子由你自己分析,不再加評論。

11)The above date is not suitable,and we have found that May 5,1995 is more convenient for the three speakers to address the meeting.

12)We will trv tO find out whether it is wise to use the central office for the meeting and let you know.

13)The committee considered your request carefully and approved it

14)Please let US know whether you can accompany Mr.Jones to the district meeting.

15)We are absolutely sure that Mr.Jones,experienced and creative, has an opportunity to advance in the company.

16)We certainly know your policy on filing tax returns and intend to obey the stated regulations.

17)Paper shortage has forced US to limit our correspondence.

18)Besides,the monthly postage budget is only$200.

19)We must inform you that our research department will no longer provide services.

20)You may need two weeks to collect data for that report.

21)I manage the three offices in the city,attend all planning sessions and visit foreign plants

22)We believe the material on career opportunities in New York we are sending separately will help you.

23)If you can’t attend the meeting.please let us know as soon as possible.

24)We regret tO inform you that we don’t want to participate now.

25)We believe the bill is correct,but contact us if you need more information

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將下列各題組合成完整而符合邏輯的句子。1.particularly those/doctors recommend/like reading,typing,or sewing/that/who spend many hour~everyone exercise everyday/doing sedentary work/2.training animals/more dangerous than/fnr instance/jobs/truck driving/there are/3.automobiles and computets|to export/such as/more and more/they have shifted/high—tech productd4.extended family/in most countries/are/such things as/out of date/5.from poverty/many great people/for example/in the world/Lincoln and Edison/have rise/

選用前面的條件句型組合句子。1.The company/advertise/overseas       It/be/more competitive/last year2.Employees/live/more than 10 kmfrom offlee     They/receive/travel allowance3.We/choose/Site B      The building/finish/by April4.Managing Director/resign/now     The company/benefit/immediatdy5.The company/pay/less commission    Profits/be/higher/last year6.We/mreceive/architects’plan     The buildlng/complete/ next month7.Employees/mwork/more than ten hours overtime    They/get/an extra day’s holiday8.He/be/Managing Director      The company/collapse9.There/be/fewer management staff      More work/do10.We/not build/rest room      The employees/strike

現(xiàn)選擇一合適的詞或短語把下面A和B兩部分連接起來。cause,be caused by,result from,result in,lead to          A                                          B1)Imprecise terms of reference               a)unsatisfactory report2)Low demand                                 b)expensive product3)The high level of leasing                  c)higher level of taxation4)Lack of interest in the new production plan d)low staff morale5)The Success of the report                    e)careful planning6)The unsuitable photocopy                     f)poor maintenance ofequipment service

挑選下列形容詞按照復(fù)印機(jī)表格前兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容的例子對第三至六項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行比較:high,reliable,heavy,deep,low,wide,narrow,light3)________________________________________________________4)________________________________________________________5)________________________________________________________6)________________________________________________________

用所給的詞、短語或句型將下列句子譯成英語:1)你掌握的信息越全面準(zhǔn)確,你就越可能作出正確的決策。(the...the...)2)今年世界的鋼鐵產(chǎn)量比去年高出百分之十五。(higherthan...)3)他對別人的關(guān)心遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)勝過對自己的關(guān)心。(much more concerned about...than...)4)世界貿(mào)易組織與以前相比變得更為強(qiáng)大和有效了。(the World Trade Organization,more than...)5)在我們所接到的報(bào)盤中,你們的最沒有競爭力因而也是最不能接受的。(offers,theleast...,the most...)6)他的工作表現(xiàn)比我們公司的其他雇員好得多。(perform much better than...)

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